Separated by a passport and 8000 miles - An Acrostic Sonnet 30-05-25

Calling over a blurry video,
As much emotion as static would allow,
Natheless I knew you missed me; your kiddo
I can see it in your eyes and wrinkles now.

Ever since I boarded the plane for distant lands,
Venturing zealously for a better life
Excitement eclipsed the price of my plans;
Repenting now I didn’t kiss goodbye.

Recalling sweat and all the pain endured,
Even as I build another life anew,
This house lacks warmth and I'm insecure-
Underneath it all I long for you.

Rooted to home only in the tongue I hold,
Now I'm counting the debt which I've long owed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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