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Poetry/Senyru
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1702-987-27
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
Copying any part of this work is prohibited without permission.

Written, January 27, 2025
For the International Contest, A Jan 2025 Posted Poem
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/28/2025

Second Place

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

my tears fall on stone my cloak of sorrow heavy ... the mask I wear smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2025 8:23:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad story/write in just three lines. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2025 8:18:00 AM
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Paula, thank you so much for the congratulation and compliment, and comment ~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/28/2025 7:58:00 PM
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Congrats. It's one of your best senryu.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/28/2025 9:27:00 AM
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Wonderful one for Brian
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/28/2025 3:52:00 AM
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Well done with this senryu. The last line makes it
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2025 8:20:00 AM
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Oliver, thank you for the compliment, I have been working on how to do haiku and senryu and I think it is all in that last line to make it~

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