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Poetry/Senyru
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1702-987-27
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, January 27, 2025
For the International Contest, A Jan 2025 Posted Poem
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/28/2025

Second Place

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

senyru

 
my tears fall on stone my cloak of sorrow heavy ... the mask I wear smiles
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad story/write in just three lines. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
La France Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 8:18 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulation and compliment, and comment ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 7:58 PM
Congrats. It's one of your best senryu.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Wonderful one for Brian
Mckeithan Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Well done with this senryu. The last line makes it
La France Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 8:20 AM
Oliver, thank you for the compliment, I have been working on how to do haiku and senryu and I think it is all in that last line to make it~
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