Sentinel

Night bridge to nowhere Guarding starry western sky Will they come in peace? © Apr 11 2010

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Kim M

Date: 4/11/2010 10:42:00 AM

Another thought ...Looking up at the stars in the sky behind the bridge, one wonders, what other life forms may exist. And, should they visit us, will they be friendly?

Kim M

Date: 4/11/2010 8:15:00 AM

The soldier on guard hopes he has an uneventful night ...doesn't want to get into any scruff. Not tonight. Wishful thinking. I enjoyed gaining this perspective of this military post/job.

Date: 4/11/2010 6:29:00 AM

Interesting perspective. I like the question at the end--leaves the reader with something to ponder about. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/11/2010 6:17:00 AM

A fine haiku. I enjoyed it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2010 2:04:00 AM

Innteresting thoughts on the picture...Winner for sure..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara