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Sentimentality

a hardening mangosteen
with wounded white seeds
increasing into rotten arrogance
of monstrous'  velocity

sentimentality-
rises slowly to the skin
emitting cerebral poison
flavored with the sourest 
and most bitter condiments

as troubled being 
devours senseless hurt
sentimentality’s lava
flows drifting soul into sin


June 4, 2022      9.52am

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Date: 6/17/2022 11:44:00 AM
Yes, emotions take over. This is well written. Ann
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/18/2022 11:53:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend Ann for stopping by and your kind words. God bless you. Hugs
Date: 6/4/2022 3:42:00 PM
wow, you really made it sinful. Some great images, Len. Thanks for your recent comments on my poety.
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/12/2022 10:56:00 PM
My pleasrue dear. Yes I tried to make it as negative as i can dear. welcome and thanks also for stopping by. God bless you always. Hugs

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