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Original title: the Sentimental Taste

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A sentimental writer tries to ram manufactured feelings down our throats. Those of us inclined toward an appreciation of authentic emotions will feel the bile rising as we try to digest what we deem to be indigestible. A reader or a writer who - like a connoisseur of fine foods and wines - enjoys what is natural and devoid of artificial additives will (upon reading overly seasoned and flavored sentimental poetry) most likely wish to literally vomit. May 25, 2022 for Julia Ward's Sentimentality Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/18/2022 3:35:00 PM
Wow, Andrea! “Ram manufactured feelings down our throats”, “feel the bile rising”, and “literally vomit.” What a very visceral, visually vivifying poem!
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Date: 5/29/2022 9:42:00 AM
Andrea, a great take on the contest theme. Yours is a very clever write. Good Luck. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/29/2022 11:11:00 AM
thanks for that. It's a harsh poem but what the sponsor is looking for. I really do dislike over-sentimental poems.
Date: 5/28/2022 10:08:00 PM
Right on Andrea! I have to catch up on all your posts. There are so many! Hope you are having a great weekend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/27/2022 2:00:00 AM
Beautifully written. Best wishes in the contest
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