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Sentimental Recluses Usher In New Emotions Via the Death of Order

humpf zap zarathustra honks
jingle jangle splash 
                            shiin

doki doki 
             pada pada

clunk clank crash

snore snore

                 .......snore

tick tock tick


            bang bang bang 
                                   ROAR

shiin silence

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Date: 2/23/2010 3:05:00 PM
...................................silence... I can't be silent.. this poem is.. rhythmatic:)Charma
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:39:00 AM
i liked the ryhthm
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