Sentimental Recluses Usher In New Emotions Via the Death of Order

humpf zap zarathustra honks
jingle jangle splash 
                            shiin

doki doki 
             pada pada

clunk clank crash

snore snore

                 .......snore

tick tock tick


            bang bang bang 
                                   ROAR

shiin silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:05 PM
...................................silence... I can't be silent.. this poem is.. rhythmatic:)Charma
Palli Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:39 AM
i liked the ryhthm
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