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New day with green-yellow possibilities rousing the trees. camouflaging my nose, mouth and cheeks but at least my eyes see. I long to imbibe on the woodsy scent — lids closed and mask free. 7/26/2020 Modern Sijo 45 syllables

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Date: 7/29/2020 10:25:00 AM
I too, long for the days to walk through the park and breathe in the magestic scents of nature. (Even the Eewy ones!). Fantasic poem that captured everyone's wish.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2020 3:42:00 AM
I like that...even the eewy ones.Thank you, Terri!
Date: 7/28/2020 5:07:00 AM
I am completely mask-free because I go NO WHERE. This is my advice to you also, my friend. Nice sijo. I had forgotten this form.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2020 6:27:00 PM
Right...my husband still says I have to work. I keep soldiering on. Hugs!
Date: 7/27/2020 2:36:00 AM
Today's world in a nutshell dearest, Kim! Very well done! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2020 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! Your comment lifts me. God bless!
Date: 7/26/2020 6:48:00 PM
A poem for today Kim, love it, and please stay safe,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 7:32:00 PM
Thank you! You too!
Date: 7/26/2020 7:12:00 AM
- We all long for a mask-free day, Kim :) - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 9:51:00 AM
We do! It’s also uncomfortable around the unmasked. So sad we have to be this way. Hugs!
Date: 7/26/2020 6:12:00 AM
A timely piece. Lovely done, xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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