Gael Attal Poet Rhyme

Sentence Structure Matters!!!!!

Sentence structure matters


Attention don't we really if pay
Build or to invention the we poem way
Might words just the scramble we as well
Everyone absurd that because it's will

Nicely don't words if the flow
Read will concisely them one no
Very really true it's apropos
What is because that silly we we wrote know

Scatter trying to now I'm not
Fun or for flatter this plot
Her to tell just I forgot
"Sentence" ... like a matters structure lot

If we don't really pay attention
To the way we build poem or invention
We might as well just scramble the words
Because everyone will think that it's absurd

If the words don't flow nicely
No one will read them concisely
Apropos it's very true really
Because we know that what we wrote is silly

Now I'm not trying to scatter
This plot for fun or flatter
I just forgot to tell her
A lot ... like "sentence structure matters"

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Donna Golden January 27, 2009 at 9:38 PM Creative and entertaining. I've come to expect nothing less from you. Take care, Gael. Donna G.

Debbie Guzzi January 8, 2009 at 5:59 PM grin..don't like blank verse aye? Light & Love Debbie Guzzi Try my Blank verse poem ;)

Jen H. January 8, 2009 at 5:21 PM Haha! That's great! When I was reading the first part I was so confused! and then I read the second part, and I was like, wow point taken very well, great job! ~Jen~