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Sentence Structure Matters!!!!!

Sentence structure matters Attention don't we really if pay Build or to invention the we poem way Might words just the scramble we as well Everyone absurd that because it's will Nicely don't words if the flow Read will concisely them one no Very really true it's apropos What is because that silly we we wrote know Scatter trying to now I'm not Fun or for flatter this plot Her to tell just I forgot "Sentence" ... like a matters structure lot If we don't really pay attention To the way we build poem or invention We might as well just scramble the words Because everyone will think that it's absurd If the words don't flow nicely No one will read them concisely Apropos it's very true really Because we know that what we wrote is silly Now I'm not trying to scatter This plot for fun or flatter I just forgot to tell her A lot ... like "sentence structure matters"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/27/2009 9:38:00 PM
Creative and entertaining. I've come to expect nothing less from you. Take care, Gael. Donna G.
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Date: 1/8/2009 5:59:00 PM
grin..don't like blank verse aye? Light & Love Debbie Guzzi Try my Blank verse poem ;)
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Date: 1/8/2009 5:21:00 PM
Haha! That's great! When I was reading the first part I was so confused! and then I read the second part, and I was like, wow point taken very well, great job! ~Jen~
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