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Sensuous Senryu

SENSUOUS      SENRYU


Hot  flesh craves it fast 
Ecstatic tension build up
Peak surge release now 

(written for Francine’s  Contest        sensuous senryus )

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Carolyn Devonshire

June 26, 2011 at 1:51 PM

Awesome, Syd. Very passionate indeed. You should do well in the contest with this entry! That last line -- well, let's just say I needed the surging "release." :) My physical therapist says I shouldn't spend much time sitting at a computer and I don't think you read the blog so I didn't want you to think I was ignoring you. Getting well just takes priority now. Four weeks of PT and maybe it'll help the 10 bulging discs that are pinching nerves. Love, Carolyn

Sidney Beck

June 26, 2011 at 2:04 PM

glad you liked the senryu..actually i did a funny one first and francine warned me it was unacceptable check it...its called ITS NOT THE HOKEY COKEY..you'll laugh....am sorry that you have the disc problem my wife also has a dodgy disc and it is painful.....so I hope your PT wil lhelp ( you're right I dont get time t o read a lot of blogs or anything)...all my very best wishes as always Carolyn...take care

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