Carol Mitra Poet Verse

Sensuality

Across the room I could see
A pair of feet approaching me
The sari skimmed her soft feet
For me it was a visual treat
Small dainty feet to and fro
The curve of the arch mesmerized me

Red vermillion outlined the sides
I could hear the soft jingle of  payal’s
The nails were painted a dainty pink
The toe ring was silver with a flower or two
She stood now facing me

I looked at her from top to toe
My mind was made up it had to be 
I had fallen in love with her beautiful feet 
My new bride turned on her heel once more
I blushed and headed for the door.

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Aditi Mishra July 5, 2020 at 3:24 PM Love the creative references of a bride's feet and the adornments of toe rings, anklets, vermilion. Congratulations on your win Carol! Carol Mitra July 5, 2020 at 8:53 PM Thanks Aditi, yes I too love this aspect, after all she steps into her new world....her new home and husband.

Silent One July 1, 2020 at 5:26 PM A nice poem, however, i did not find it sensual.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Carol Mitra July 1, 2020 at 8:49 PM Thank you.....I will strive to do better next time.

Mahtab Bangalee June 28, 2020 at 5:53 AM fall in love and it begins there another sense to enjoy the moment of after falling .......pleasure to read Carol Mitra July 5, 2020 at 8:55 PM Thanks Mahtab.....much appreciated. Carol Mitra June 28, 2020 at 6:50 AM Thank you....the feet I find are a very sensual part of a woman's body and so have highlighted this....and yes love all over again.