- Sensual and Beautiful -

The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere
                          it's not just me who regards the beauty
                           The horizon is a lovely color spectrum
                              The sky is like a watercolor paper
                                The colors float across the sky
                             Small narrow clouds create stripes
                        The sun drink some water from the ocean
                           Dipped its colors carefully in the ocean
                                  Playing a bit with  the waves
                                       It is an amazing sight
                                    The colors are so intensive
                                     It is sensual and beautiful
                         The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere
                                        I do not know where
                        but it has given me an inner peace and pleasure






03.04.2013
A-L Andresen :)
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Lindley Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Painted a very pretty picture in my mind. I love beautiful sunsets!!
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:30 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Robert, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Vaillancourt Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 4:01 PM
I like your writing style because you write clearly and concisely, no wasted words. There's definitely food for thought here.
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 4:11 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Chris, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Davis Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Words of peace and tranquility. Every line is full of images that take the reader on a journey of beauty. Nice job
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 2:42 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Robin, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hill Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 12:49 PM
The title says it all, really enjoyed the imagery in this write, OK I'll say it, it was both beautiful and sensual :)
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 12:52 PM
- Beautiful said, Gary ! - Enjoyable with a visit from you ,your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:56 AM
I do not know where but it has given me an inner peace and pleasure sums it up perfectly fine pen
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:59 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Linda, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 3:29 AM
this one i really like.... i can't help but be thrown not only into your world but also in the remembrance of your own special place. .. i send you " The sky like a watercolor paperr, The colors float across the sky...:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:59 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Nette, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Morrison Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Wonderfully descriptive! You can actually see the sunset in your words.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 12:34 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Kim, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Deason Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 11:35 AM
very colorful, you seem like you speak from an artists mouth... Are you an artist?
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 11:38 AM
- No, I'm not ... but thanks ! - Enjoyable with a visit from you Danielle, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Weeks Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:45 AM
very descriptive poetry! Made me descriptivisualize the scene!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:47 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Stephanie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 3:05 AM
What a lovely, 'colorful' piece! We marvel at nature's wonders, and feel reassured that the sun will rise again! Well done Anne Lise!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thank you for your kind remarks... they are much appreciated!)
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 3:07 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you Keith, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Perry Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Picturesque! I feel the same when Im admiring the views from the beach..... calming. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:08 AM
Enjoyable with a visit from you Jennifer, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bordner Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:50 PM
The Sun is a very sensuous and intelligent source; good to know it intends to return Anne - J.A.B. %
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:05 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Justin, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 9:34 AM
a very amazing view you picture here my friend Anne Lise..so like it...thanks for sharing and for passing by on my poem always...Just been here sometimes co'z I'm so busy with everything..next week is the start of my vacation..27 days yahoo!!! (^__^) have a nice day..hugssss!!! Maria
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 9:55 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Maria, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ougo Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:45 AM
awwww....am so into it...beautiful write Anne...like painting shades of peace across my heart...thanks once more..your pieces inspire :-)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:50 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Word, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Maharaj Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:02 AM
A feeling of serenity is felt when reading this. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:07 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Sasha, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Harrell Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Beautiful, Anne-Lise! Gazing at the sun as it is setting can have a calming effect. There is something so peaceful about it. It makes time go slower somehow :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 12:59 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Toquyen, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Anne Lise, all I can say after reading this is Wow! Really beautiful piece of poetry :) xoxox
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 12:03 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Wilma, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Minardi Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:04 AM
beautifully written, Anne Lise. your poems are really sweet.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 7:06 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Dinda, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 2:24 AM
SPECTACULAR write here, Anne! Simply dazzling and spellbinding - the sun and the ocean. Wow... ;) you sparked my interest! Favoriting it! Love these 4 lines in general: The sun disappears in the horizon somewhere it's not just me who regards the beauty The horizon is a lovely color spectrum The sky is like a watercolor paper................... Nicely crafted work, my friend! ~~DWB
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:05 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you David, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Duncan Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 3:52 PM
I like this picture very much Anne, have an awesome weekend xo's ;}
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 5:31 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Debbie, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Your poem is pretty Anne, and the ending is wonderful. thank you for the comment. I am doing fine, however, I don't share my tears and pain with my daughter. I think that would not help either of us. so i cry when I'm all alone. That is what my last poem was basically about. thank you for sharing your tender comment. xox~ Linda
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 1:01 PM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Linda, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 10:19 AM
beautifully written and ever so visual...
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 10:33 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Harry, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Van Breda Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise for this beautiful descriptive narrative of God's stunning creation. You continue to inspire me.
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 10:32 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Kim, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 5:01 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Ravi, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Cavanaugh Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 10:44 PM
What a beautiful picture you have penned. Nature is amazing. Thanks for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 5:00 AM
- A pleasure that I could share my sunset with you Jon, thanks for visit and comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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