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Sensitivity

I've been told I'm much too sensitive 
                         my eyes leak tears like a used sieve

                    I cry over sad movies, words in a book 
                         so go ahead and give me that 'look'

                    Sometimes I cry goodbye on the phone
                         So what?  I wasn't chiseled out of stone

                    Tell me I get my feelings hurt too fast 
                         I'll say I cry from memories of my past

                    Don't tell me I need to restrain the flow
                         Maybe I've suffered more than you know

                    I can take being knocked around by my foes 
                         those who bitterly want to step on my toes

                    But words from someone I really care about 
                         cause me to frown with my mouth in a pout

                    I'm a sensitive woman who tends to cry 
                         if I tell you I don't, I've told you a lie

                    I would never intentionally hurt anyone 
                         If I like you, I'll tease you, but it's in fun

                    Falling tears may not be in fashion
                         I don't think it's a crime to have passion

                    So please don't think I'm being a grumps
                         if you do I'll get down in the dumps

                    I've been told that I'm a tough cookie
                         you can make bet on that with any bookie

                    I'll be your friend, honest and true 
                         but don't hurt me 'cuz it'll make blue

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 7/23/2017 12:47:00 PM This poem touched my sensitive soul, Lin. Grand phrases expressed w/depth of emotion and wisdom of experience. You read my poem, "Real Men Cry" today, so it is kismet that I would pluck this gem out of your poetry catalog to read. This is such a beautiful, endearing poem. It makes me like you that much more, dear friend. Love always. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/17/2016 9:31:00 AM Hi Lin, once more you place a little of yourself before us. Sensitivity is indeed a great gift. I embrace my sensitivity Lin and i look on it as a strength, never a weakness. Keep strong and be true to your heart and be not afraid to shed the tears. A beautiful write Lin....Vladislav. A seven from me. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/19/2016 1:37:00 PM Thank you, sir, for your sweet words and your rating.

Laura Breidenthal Date: 1/13/2016 2:24:00 PM Another beautiful piece, wonderfully crafted, Lin. I can relate to the spirit of it. " Falling tears may not be in fashion I don't think it's a crime to have passion" No way it is a crime--its a gift you use well! Always, Laura Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/13/2016 3:50:00 PM Thanks, Laura. If we have no passion, we have no real heart. I appreciate you pointing out a particular line.

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/2/2016 10:29:00 AM I love this piece! Superb couplet rhyming and phrasing... '...leak tears like a used sieve,' '...I wasn't chiseled out of stone,' Simply beautiful! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/2/2016 10:48:00 AM Your praises are taken to heart, Keith. Thank you so very much. I wasn't sure if I should have posted this one because my sensitive nature is revealed, but if Brigitte says it's a sign of strength, I agree. ~ glad I did. Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/2/2016 10:32:00 AM ...and a super quote from Brigitte Nichole together with a lovely illustration!

White Sage Date: 1/1/2016 8:54:00 AM wow! beautiful pictures accompanied by a nice poem Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/1/2016 8:59:00 AM Thank you very much for both compliments.

Jan Allison Date: 1/1/2016 8:52:00 AM Heartfelt honest write Lin and one I and I am sure many others can relate to. Here am I blubbing watching a sad film lol:-) Hope 2016 is a wonderful year for you:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/1/2016 8:59:00 AM You blubber all you want to, Jan. I KNOW you have a big heart... Thanks.