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Sensitivity

I know of your sensitivity And your proclivity For self abasement of yourself So if you will allow me to help I could show you Just how amazing you are You are like a shining star A smile so bright And eyes that twinkle In everyone's life you leave a sprinkle Of love and light and a sense that they've been blessed Because you may not realise this but your the best So don't put yourself down Don't ever wear a frown With you I am always down With picking you up off of the ground And it bothers not one bit Because in every sense you are worth it You need to find the strength for self belief You need to change your proclivity And not be rooted so deep in sensitivity But if you cannot manage that I will be here in your hour of need Because you are like a shining star to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/26/2018 7:17:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww! No other words could add any more merit to this one.
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you much appreciated. Faux
Date: 7/26/2018 6:54:00 AM
I like the twist in your poem: Don't ever wear a frown With you I am always down With picking you up off of the ground Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating. Faux

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