Sensitive Community: My True Colors

I once knew a poet named Carlene.
               Whom you would assume was quite serene.
                     But screw-up, you'd better not!
                          Or you'll be in for a shock!
                               For her '***** slaps' can be unforeseen.







Written Feb. 24, 2016 for contest
Sponsored by: SKAT A  
An original, poem on the theme of .....Sensitive Community ........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:20 PM
lol...nice one ...enjoyed
Simpson Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Thanks Joseph, much appreciated
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Hi Carlene, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
Simpson Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:27 PM
That's ok LINDA! hope your move went well..
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Carlene..
Simpson Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Thanks Doc
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Loving this one again!! Congrats for the win.
Simpson Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Thank you Andrea
Callus Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Honest and straight to the point! A very worthy winner, Carlene. Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
Simpson Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Thank you Paul, much appreciated
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carlene I really loved this one-) hugs Jan xx
Simpson Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Much thanks Jan!
A  Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Carlene, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
Simpson Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Hey SKAT, I miss u on the Soup!.....Thanks for placing me.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Joking aside, great job. Good luck in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Wowzer! I don't want to cross you when you are mad. You seem so nice!!
Simpson Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 9:20 PM
I am nice by nature Richard, but human nature causes us to get angry when crossed......Even Jesus got angry at one point (Mark 11: 15&16.
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Good one, Carlene! LOL. . . .Janice
Simpson Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Thanks Janice, much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 7:07 AM
- A great limerick, Carlene ! - (I'm bad at limerick :))) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Simpson Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Haight Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Wow! Powerful, Carlene, and a well-done Limerick for sure! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Simpson Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Thanks Sandra xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 8:01 PM
well DONE, Carleen, that's kinda mean!!! heehee
Simpson Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Sorry Andrea...i saw the word 'ribald'..and tht was IT for me!
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Carlene, I'm not peeking in... LOL, yes I am. I'm just checking some of the entries. I was not sure how this was going to turn out. So far so good. Awesome limerick... LINDA
Simpson Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Thanks Linda, and peeking is ok with me......i'm sending you a message, check your inbox (it has nothing to do with the contest)
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 4:55 PM
I will keep a safe distance...lol
Simpson Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:29 AM
No need Tim, only is u plan on pissing me off.
Tudor Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 3:40 PM
I see you like to put your cards on the table!! Very clever and succinct with plenty of levity. J.
Simpson Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:23 AM
J....who doesn't like to put their cards on the table?! show me one, and i'll tell u tht's a lie :-)
Allison Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 2:37 PM
You sure pack a punch with your words - great one Carlene:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Simpson Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Thanks Jan!.....hope all is well with u and urs.
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