Sensitive Community

Naive Guillotine


I once knew a poet named Balveen
Whose heart was not a touchscreen   
Confused when she read some barbs
Until she was shot by shards 
She rued at their naive guillotine


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February 29, 2016
Contest : Sensitive Community
 A PD Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:15 AM
It's going to take another month... lol...I'm taking a break from the unpacking part... thanks for the reply. Linda...xox
Cheema Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Best wishes!
A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Balveen, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
Cheema Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Hope you are well settled by now. Thanks on congratulating me! Love...
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Balveen..
Cheema Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Thanks Upma!
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Great job, Balveen. Congrats for your win.
Cheema Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 3:02 PM
OUCH! great one Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Thanks Jan!
A  Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
Cheema Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Thanks Linda!
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