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Sensitive Community

Naive Guillotine I once knew a poet named Balveen Whose heart was not a touchscreen Confused when she read some barbs Until she was shot by shards She rued at their naive guillotine Syllables per line-97779 February 29, 2016 Contest : Sensitive Community A PD Contest

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Date: 3/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
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It's going to take another month... lol...I'm taking a break from the unpacking part... thanks for the reply. Linda...xox
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/20/2016 10:45:00 AM
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Best wishes!
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/20/2016 12:46:00 AM
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Balveen, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/20/2016 6:43:00 AM
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Hope you are well settled by now. Thanks on congratulating me! Love...
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 2:10:00 AM
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Congrats on ur awesome win Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/16/2016 11:53:00 AM
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Thanks Upma!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/15/2016 4:04:00 PM
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Great job, Balveen. Congrats for your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:16:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
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OUCH! great one Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:17:00 PM
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Thanks Jan!
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Skat A
Date: 3/14/2016 10:35:00 AM
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Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:17:00 PM
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Thanks Linda!

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