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Sensing What's Coming

a quickening of the pulse sensing what’s coming a lifting of the heart the atmosphere humming lighter shades of gray first then brilliant colors in streaks the majesty of the dawning prelude to sun’s crowning… the whole world’s reborn, alive yet humanity still sleeps If men only knew what they’re missing from their beds they would leap

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Date: 3/18/2024 10:44:00 PM
Gershon I thought of the Rapture when I read this but it could be a beautiful morning to enjoy and to see. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 3/18/2024 5:16:00 AM
your poem speaks of the beauty that envelops us each day, a spiritual rebirth of sorts begins at day's dawn. Yet, we sleep, sometimes in 'waking' sleep. Wise words this morning, Gershon. Have a great day, Sara
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thought provoking! I enjoyed the rhyme but the theme of what’s coming is intriguing! What’s coming can be viewed from different perspectives and cultural or religious backgrounds as well as scientific! What is the poems inspiration what do you see coming?
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Date: 3/17/2024 7:43:00 PM
You're asking me to roll up my sleeve and give away all my tricks. No can do. ~ Merlin the Conehead Magician. lol.

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