Sensing the End

SENSING THE END

I think I’ve given you all I’ve got
Perhaps it’s that I’ve lost the plot
Not something I have seen before
No passion is there anymore
Light in your eyes has dimmed somewhat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 1:27 PM
- Don't let the candle burn out - Touching and sad, Howard -Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Howard, congratulations in your win. Hugs my friend.
May Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Very nicely penned Howard, Congrats on your win
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