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Example for my contest :)

Sensible Sentences

Immense feelings 
Tend to tense more 
'Held in suspense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dutta Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:43 AM
FINE. Trying your contest.
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:18 PM
thanks for another great model for your contest, Charles. I think it's cool to take it both forward or backward.
Radhakrishna Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Good one makes lot of sense! Will try!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Good example Charles. Shall try to do one. God bless ~ Ani
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 7:37 PM
Got it. Thanks, Charlie. I'll give it a spin. ~ Gunga Din
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:56 PM
thanks for the unique challenge I will have to see if my muse will come up with something:-) hugs jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 1:42 PM
"Suspense" is more than just a moniker for an Alfred Hitchcock film, Charlie. It is what helps keeps hope alive. A wonderful example for your contest. Thank you for sharing! Hugs, Carolyn
Y. Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Hi Charlie, This is a good example for you contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Good one. Well thought out. Thanks for the visit to my poem which had the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
One Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Nice one Charlie
La France Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Charlie, I like, although quite mindboggling at the moment well maybe that is because it is 1AM here in my part of Canada, I will work out this puzzle tomorrow and hopefully write you something worthy _Constance
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