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Example for my contest :)

Sensible Sentences

Immense feelings 
Tend to tense more 
'Held in suspense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 12/9/2020 7:43:00 AM
FINE. Trying your contest.
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Date: 12/6/2020 6:18:00 PM
thanks for another great model for your contest, Charles. I think it's cool to take it both forward or backward.
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Date: 12/6/2020 9:55:00 AM
Good one makes lot of sense! Will try!
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Date: 12/6/2020 8:56:00 AM
Good example Charles. Shall try to do one. God bless ~ Ani
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Date: 12/5/2020 7:37:00 PM
Got it. Thanks, Charlie. I'll give it a spin. ~ Gunga Din
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Date: 12/5/2020 2:56:00 PM
thanks for the unique challenge I will have to see if my muse will come up with something:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2020 1:42:00 PM
"Suspense" is more than just a moniker for an Alfred Hitchcock film, Charlie. It is what helps keeps hope alive. A wonderful example for your contest. Thank you for sharing! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2020 7:20:00 AM
Hi Charlie, This is a good example for you contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2020 3:41:00 AM
Good one. Well thought out. Thanks for the visit to my poem which had the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Date: 12/5/2020 3:33:00 AM
Nice one Charlie
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Date: 12/4/2020 10:00:00 PM
Charlie, I like, although quite mindboggling at the moment well maybe that is because it is 1AM here in my part of Canada, I will work out this puzzle tomorrow and hopefully write you something worthy _Constance
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