Senses Working Over Time

I can smell you on my hands.
I can taste you on my lips.
When the wind blows I hear you whisper my name.
With every heart beat, I can feel this feeling grow.
I can see me loving you forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:01 PM
A very romantic poem, Joe. Well done and congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Your ending of this poem is brilliant, just brilliant Joe! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:42 AM
forever is what we should all strive for, it's all we can long for..beautifully expressed thank you and congrats : )-luloo
Vee Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Laura.
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