Senses

SOME SAY THERE ARE ONLY FIVE SENSES
SOME SAY THERE ARE SIX SENSES
SOME SAY SOME HAVE FIVE 
       SOME HAVE SIX

I PONSER THIS AND I ADDED
WORDS MAKE THE SEVENTH SENSE

AS IN THE BEGINING THERE WAS THE WORD
AND THE WORD CREATED THE EARTH
IN SIX DAYS AND RESTED ON THE SEVENTH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cohan Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:46 AM
sometimes sense makes little sense unless one puts those senses in perspective....i suggest you not get carried away with biblical ideaology and stick to what you have to teach on your own....but a great concept nonetheless....until chicken little's prediction comes to pass..sincerely, PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~ (REMEMBER what we discussed about errors please and don't take them as insults but rather as the help i hope you will always accept that i offer you' your's in galactic harmony
Buchner Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:48 AM
so true...i told you that i need you
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