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Senseless Words

my fingers
roaming
like my mind
tenderly
stroking
thoughts
through keys
but making
no sense
beneath
the trembling

perhaps
they'd
rather be
pressing
against
the edges
of you

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John Lawless

December 13, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Sandra, this poem lingers like the tormented touch of separations angst.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 8:19 PM

Thank you John...it started off as writers block and just trying to type something to jump start my muse and this is where it ended up... hugs

Jeff Connelly

December 13, 2019 at 10:25 AM

Sandra this poem is on the edge of seductiveness. Poetically beautiful. Thank you.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 10:31 AM

Thank you so much Jeff for such a kind comment :)

Jennifer Proxenos

December 13, 2019 at 9:38 AM

What an emotional poem from the heart, Sandra. Happy Holidays and a blessed Christmas. Jennifer.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:51 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer...my muse has been lacking inspiration with the gloomy weather we keep getting... Merry Christmas and happy holidays to you my friend :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

December 13, 2019 at 7:32 AM

Ah, a poetic missive that made me smile today, my friend.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:50 AM

Thank you my friend...if it made you smile, it was worth the write :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

December 13, 2019 at 7:26 AM

Very articulate and emotive my friend.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Thank you so much Vijay... these days the weathers all the same and rather boring my muse is fighting to find inspiration... hugs

Chris Green

December 13, 2019 at 6:59 AM

There are never any senseless words that come from your pen my friend. This made perfect sense and my heart understood every word. Beautifully done Sandy.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:48 AM

Thank you Chris...this one was a result of writer's block...i just started typing senseless thoughts... glad you made sense out of it my friend...Good Morning :) hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 13, 2019 at 3:21 AM

Words that spring from the heart have meaning in themselves that the mind would take time to understand. Intriguing beautiful poem dear, Sandra.

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:46 AM

Thank you demetrios, it started out as writer's block and i just started typing...it became a poem... thankfully :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

December 12, 2019 at 10:34 PM

I guess you have proved definitively that a female wrote this poem, b/c: Give me those keys any day, baby!! Vrrrroooom! See ya... Seriously now,... Yes Men are from another planet, aren't they/we/whatever/whoever/za/ze/zo/zu: I thank you! Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams

December 13, 2019 at 9:44 AM

lol...cute comment...different keys but you are a man and think differently :) thank you Gershon... hugs