Senseless Fear

The raid is the mind in your fear.
The purpose of which is spelt by light voices in your ear.
Are you sure its really not here?
Are those really voices you hear?

Watch, as I, uncertainty grips your core.
And rips the foundation that strengthens the pure,
I cause sweat in the proud as an outpour.
And the excuses to why you shake…poor

  Creeping up your spine 
  Darkness hovering like sour wine
  Forcing its way down your gut as you whine 
  Then coming back up you are totally mine

  Are those really voices your hear
  Have you ever faced fear?
  I whisper in your ear.
  This is fear right here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 7, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. have fun on P.S. with luv..
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May 6, 2011 at 4:35 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Abigail. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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