Sense Perception

Connection by vision
although I did not see
... the torment,
which seems like eternity.


Satisfied by scent
although I could not smell
... the vulture,
that so defines your culture.


Pleased by taste
although I could not tell
... the contagion,
from your kiss i'm containing.


Death by touch
although I did not feel
... the deception,
that comes from my sense perception.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 25, 2015 at 12:16 AM
CHRISTOPHER, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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January 25, 2015 at 12:27 AM
lol never mind I figured it out :-)
Delorenzo Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Hello and thank you kindly. Whats HM?
A   Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM
thank you so much for the reply... ((regarding the bottom reply))
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January 13, 2015 at 5:23 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Christopher - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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January 13, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Anne :-)
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January 10, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Cristopher,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 12, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Thank you for your kind words Linda. :-)
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January 9, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Rather good! :-) john.
Delorenzo Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 1:30 PM
Thank you.
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