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Sense Perception

Connection by vision although I did not see ... the torment, which seems like eternity. Satisfied by scent although I could not smell ... the vulture, that so defines your culture. Pleased by taste although I could not tell ... the contagion, from your kiss i'm containing. Death by touch although I did not feel ... the deception, that comes from my sense perception.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/25/2015 12:16:00 AM
CHRISTOPHER, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Christopher Delorenzo
Date: 1/25/2015 12:27:00 AM
lol never mind I figured it out :-)
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Christopher Delorenzo
Date: 1/25/2015 12:24:00 AM
Hello and thank you kindly. Whats HM?
Date: 1/15/2015 11:00:00 PM
thank you so much for the reply... ((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:23:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Christopher - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Christopher Delorenzo
Date: 1/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Anne :-)
Date: 1/10/2015 9:24:00 PM
Cristopher,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Christopher Delorenzo
Date: 1/12/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Linda. :-)
Date: 1/9/2015 7:15:00 PM
Rather good! :-) john.
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Christopher Delorenzo
Date: 1/12/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you.

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