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Sense of Betrayal

Lies are a thin veil - A filmy shield Through which the heart can sense The shape of betrayal Category:Serious For Francine's 5 lines or less Contest

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Date: 7/28/2013 5:48:00 AM
This poem is exquisite.
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Date: 7/23/2013 1:11:00 PM
Congrats my friend. I missed earlier, but read now this beautiful poem. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/20/2013 10:01:00 AM
Creative imagery! Suz, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/19/2013 7:21:00 PM
Suz, wow.. the shape of betrayal --a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:41:00 AM
wow...impressive 4 lines... congrats! ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:05:00 AM
Filled with massive truth here. Excellent!
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Date: 7/19/2013 6:48:00 AM
This is very good, congratulations on a fine win SuZ.
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Date: 7/19/2013 1:11:00 AM
very well done, Suz. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:07:00 PM
Congrats Suz on your 2nd place win in the "serious" portion of the contest
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:36:00 AM
obviously. great write
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Date: 7/17/2013 6:04:00 AM
This will do well, SuZ....wow. Full of meaning and truth. Great write...
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