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Suzanne Delaney

Sense of Betrayal

Lies are a thin veil -
A filmy shield
Through which the heart can sense
The shape of betrayal 


Category:Serious
 For Francine's 5 lines or less Contest

Copyright © Suzanne Delaney | Year Posted 2013

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July 28, 2013 at 5:48 AM

This poem is exquisite.

July 23, 2013 at 1:11 PM

Congrats my friend. I missed earlier, but read now this beautiful poem. Enjoyed well. Loved always, bl

July 20, 2013 at 10:01 AM

Creative imagery! Suz, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

July 19, 2013 at 7:21 PM

Suz, wow.. the shape of betrayal --a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

July 19, 2013 at 8:41 AM

wow...impressive 4 lines... congrats! ~SKAT~

July 19, 2013 at 8:05 AM

Filled with massive truth here. Excellent!

Richard Lamoureux

July 19, 2013 at 6:48 AM

This is very good, congratulations on a fine win SuZ.

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2013 at 1:11 AM

very well done, Suz. Congrats in the contest.

Francine Roberts

July 18, 2013 at 10:07 PM

Congrats Suz on your 2nd place win in the "serious" portion of the contest

Poet. Undertaker

July 17, 2013 at 6:36 AM

obviously. great write

Eileen Manassian

July 17, 2013 at 6:04 AM

This will do well, SuZ....wow. Full of meaning and truth. Great write...

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