Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Sense Current

Sense current passes through
to the Brain's house
mind bulb lights on 
voice seeking out

What is said there
after realization
happy sorrow all are
styled with passion

Sweet sour tastes named
to let us know with words
Mind feels real feeling
with own vibration

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Lynn Marie April 7, 2017 at 3:57 PM Lovely thoughts beautifully expressed. You have a gift for expressing what seems complex in theory, yet through your incredible artistic mind, one feels 'oh of course that makes sense'. Amazing write, a joy to read. a fave, 7+ blessings xxx hope you are very well BL :-)

Elizabeth Wesley July 28, 2011 at 9:35 PM Vibrations in the brain, nice if you can get it, pass some on to me! Nice verse. Bl Devnath July 29, 2011 at 10:02 AM Its not possible but also not impossible. If I get, certainly I shall try to pass some on to you, don't worry my friend. Good day.bl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 11:39 AM I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration BL. Love, Carol Bl Devnath July 18, 2011 at 12:53 PM Thanks, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 5:43 AM What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future BL. Love, Carol Bl Devnath July 18, 2011 at 8:21 AM You are you are, legend boss of sense, I am proud for God, you are......bl