Sensations
Open your ears and hear the noise.
Listen to the pounding of the surf,
the sound of waves crashing on the sand.
Feel the searing rays of the sun, like sparks of flames from a fire.
Touch the swirling drops of cooling mist
sweeping across the sand.
Pure blues and glorious greens fill this mirage
to inebriate the senses.
Close your eyes and try not to flounder while you stay afloat.
©K.Chun 2014
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