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Sensational Spring

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Spring, a time for rejuvenation and rebirth. I’m always thrilled when winter’s white blanket lifts revealing tiny snowdrops, which crane their necks as they peep through the earth. I imagine I can hear the golden trumpets of dainty daffodils and jaunty jonquils heralding that spring is here. On my morning ramble I love to see the little newborn lambs gamboling about in the fields, and watch the blackbirds catching insects mid flight to feed their hungry chicks. new leaves unfurling trees dressed in emerald green buds ready to burst Springtime Haibun Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by M L Kiser 03/11/21

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2021 4:55:00 AM

Very descriptive winning work. Way to go. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/5/2021 6:40:00 PM

What a stunning imagery! I love the sight of”buds ready to burst”. I personally seen scene like that last week before cherry blossoms said goodbye. Congratulations!!

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/15/2021 6:06:00 AM

Hello Jan, Magnificent, imaginative, lyrical. So apt. Thanks for Masks review Howard

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/14/2021 5:45:00 AM

Wow!! Great Job Jan! What a beautiful description and such vivid imagery!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2021 9:51:00 AM

I'm not familiar with the form, but I love your message, Jan! Very nice descriptions of spring. Best wishes for a big win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2021 11:28:00 PM

Your haibun is sensational. Loved your scenery.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2021 8:23:00 PM

Very pretty! trumpets of dainty daffodils and jaunty jonquils

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/11/2021 3:24:00 PM

A lovely spring haibun Jan, dispite the chill in the air its definitely making an entrance. Good luck in the contest Tom

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/11/2021 2:47:00 PM

Love your snowdrops peeping out line where on earth did that come from Jan Fantastic imagery of spring, and a great haiku to finish it off, best of luck in the contest cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/11/2021 1:45:00 PM

Hi Jan, Oh what a beautiful tribute to Spring. There is so much joy in your poem....just love it. Have a beautiful day! Paulette

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2021 2:01:00 PM

thanks Paulette I really enjoy writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx