Jan Allison Poet Haibun

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Sensational Spring

Spring, a time for rejuvenation and rebirth. I’m always thrilled when winter’s white blanket lifts revealing tiny snowdrops, which crane their necks as they peep through the earth. I imagine I can hear the golden trumpets of dainty daffodils and jaunty jonquils heralding that spring is here. On my morning ramble I love to see the little newborn lambs gamboling about in the fields, and watch the blackbirds catching insects mid flight to feed their hungry chicks. 

new leaves unfurling
trees dressed in emerald green
buds ready to burst

Springtime Haibun Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by M L Kiser
03/11/21

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Sara Kendrick April 20, 2021 at 4:55 AM Very descriptive winning work. Way to go. Congrats on your name being on the winners' list. Sara

JC Brul April 5, 2021 at 6:40 PM What a stunning imagery! I love the sight of”buds ready to burst”. I personally seen scene like that last week before cherry blossoms said goodbye. Congratulations!!

Howard Kerr March 15, 2021 at 6:06 AM Hello Jan, Magnificent, imaginative, lyrical. So apt. Thanks for Masks review Howard

Mark Koplin March 14, 2021 at 5:45 AM Wow!! Great Job Jan! What a beautiful description and such vivid imagery!

Carolyn Devonshire March 12, 2021 at 9:51 AM I'm not familiar with the form, but I love your message, Jan! Very nice descriptions of spring. Best wishes for a big win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Victor Buhagiar March 11, 2021 at 11:28 PM Your haibun is sensational. Loved your scenery.

Kim Rodrigues March 11, 2021 at 8:23 PM Very pretty! trumpets of dainty daffodils and jaunty jonquils

Tom Cunningham March 11, 2021 at 3:24 PM A lovely spring haibun Jan, dispite the chill in the air its definitely making an entrance. Good luck in the contest Tom

David Kavanagh March 11, 2021 at 2:47 PM Love your snowdrops peeping out line where on earth did that come from Jan Fantastic imagery of spring, and a great haiku to finish it off, best of luck in the contest cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta March 11, 2021 at 1:45 PM Hi Jan, Oh what a beautiful tribute to Spring. There is so much joy in your poem....just love it. Have a beautiful day! Paulette Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 2:01 PM thanks Paulette I really enjoy writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx