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Sensation Contending

Cool tongue teasing
Lips undone.. pleasing
Sweetness drenching
Probing tongue quenching
Heightened breathing 
Blinded with lacing 
Around me you’re pacing
Cascading inside yearning
Wanton fire burning
Inhibitions quickly fading
Transactional mating
Animalistic surging
Exploring another…
Merging...
Contending...bending...
Blending!

Copyright © Jane Bowen | Year Posted 2009

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John Rhinem Date: 4/17/2009 2:42:00 PM Smile~Yes, just another one of "Your Amazingly Well Written & Expressed Writes Dear Gifted Jane Bowen!!!":):)~Actually, all of "Your" writes today~have fit the picture of the "True Abilities of Greatness Which 'You' Hold!!!":):)~It has been a pleasure viewing "Your Gift" again!!!~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~"Have A Beautiful Day Jane Bowen!!!":):) Bye ~ Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/13/2009 6:49:00 PM Great passion, Jane! So erotic and enticing, you have me yearning for love right now. "Exploring another" is always such an intimate experience. And thank you for your comments - just an ordinary gal here. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/13/2009 3:09:00 PM Wow the passion speaks loudly here!! Great form and done with style!! ~ love, Carrie Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/13/2009 12:13:00 PM Whoa. Passion at its finest. Love the presentation and how the excellent content builds up and up! ~lol~ Awesome! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Luke Steadman Date: 4/13/2009 12:05:00 PM my bad on the wildflower philosophy! it was "through" thank you kindly for the comments and correction on it...your poetry is also amazing and in this peice my favcorite part is "Blinded with lacing Around me you’re pacing" well said...~Luke Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 4/13/2009 11:19:00 AM Jane, this is just so smooth physical emotion! great work!!! Jim...and I loved your comment on 'farm...' I've reached a dipper into a fresh-milk vat on a farm myself! mmmmm!!!! I agree! Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 4/13/2009 11:13:00 AM Oooh! ...quite the passionate piece, tastefully so, with superb language and imagery. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith (PS I altered 'Sorrow a little bit, for the better, I think. Take a look at it now!) Login to Reply