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We were at a small bar, the place only served some older regulars. An elderly guy in an old jean jacket was talkative, friendly. “What do girls learn at Yale?” He asked. “We’re taught things, like expressions, smiling, pomposity, snark, whatevering and stuff-stuff.” I bragged shamelessly. “Sure,” He chuckled, “sure - but it’s worth the money I suppose,” he gave me a toast. Limiting yourself can, in fact, set you free - try writing a Senryu Like a martial art, a tea ceremony or classical music They are a tight dance - controlled, disciplined, focused. Other styles can drift. A Senryu is like a Haiku except it deals with human feelings . . A Haiku/Senryu should three lines of 5-7-5 syllables A Haiku should be about nature A Senryu about human feelings #senryu #haiku #focus #freedom #limits

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Date: 12/9/2023 3:37:00 AM
Creative work you have penned. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/9/2023 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for commenting
Date: 12/6/2023 3:03:00 PM
Never seen dialogue in a senryu but there's always a first time. Syllable count was good
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/6/2023 4:43:00 PM
You could call the new form - Vionet. Derivative I know, but it does have a cool ring to it
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/6/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thanks. Maybe I’ve invented something ??
Date: 12/4/2023 12:24:00 PM
I like the end of the senryu the best…lol
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/4/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thanks. I added the bar scene late and it’s my favorite part too ??

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