Winged Warrior Poet Senryu

Senryu-Reality Check Please

reality check please



our reality
stuck within the matrix or...
watching the boob tube 



5/7/5-senryu




Oct.25.2018
Haiku-Senryu- Writing Challenge 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
a.k.a. Broken Wings 


Placed 3'rd [4'th of 6]

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Janice Canerdy October 29, 2018 at 3:49 PM Thought-provoking, Winged Warrior! Janice

Carolyn Devonshire October 29, 2018 at 1:46 PM Yep, that pretty much sums up the excitement in my life, WW. LOL Excellent senryu! Congrats on your win. Dear Heart has another, similar contest going now. Hugs, Carolyn

Brandy Nicole October 28, 2018 at 7:32 PM Reality Check, or Boob Tube?? No way!!! I knew it was both, and I was correct. :) Once again my Winged Warrior, your words touch the sky. Congratulations on this win. Love and Check Please. Lol. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina October 28, 2018 at 9:54 AM This is one of my fav's, WW Excellent Senryu...I think most of us can relate to...Love & peace and boob tubes...C harlie

John Lawless October 28, 2018 at 9:14 AM ...our reality....the ultimate fantasy. Nicely done WW. the perplexing blue light question...

Ravi Sathasivam October 28, 2018 at 6:20 AM Excellent. Interesting and well imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2018 at 5:40 PM I'll take the boob tube. I never got the matrix.heehee. Congrats. I loved the picture you put with this too.

Paul Callus October 27, 2018 at 5:00 PM An excellent senryu, WW, so is the accompanying gif. Congratulations on your deserved win. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2018 at 3:16 PM - Congratulations on your great Senryu win, W.W. :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. October 27, 2018 at 5:08 AM Hi WW, Your title and content for the contest is spot on. I wish the best of luck for the contest. PS, that image was way out:-) Alexis

Vladislav Raven October 27, 2018 at 2:58 AM Hi John, an interesting write. Reads like reality to me. Loved the content as usual my friend. An excellent write. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Caren Krutsinger October 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM This was a reality check for me; I think I am in the matrix, trying to fight my way back out.

Charles Messina October 25, 2018 at 9:14 PM I love this WW, an absolute reality check. Best wishes for a win in the contest. Love ,peace & reality...CM

Silent One October 25, 2018 at 4:37 PM Nice image.. Interesting one this one..

Brandy Nicole October 25, 2018 at 1:47 PM Hmm, perhaps it is a little of both. Just my simple thinking though. :) Once again- your words bring a smile my Warrior with Wings. Love and Reality. ~ Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2018 at 12:00 PM - Awesome, W.W. - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham October 25, 2018 at 11:54 AM I've often wondered that W.W. Good luck . Tom.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 25, 2018 at 10:47 AM Oooh sharp ink! Good luck in the contest :) xomo