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Senryu - Transitions

one flickering light
at the end of a dark hall…
hospice nurse running

Date: 19 Mar 2019
Contest: Writing Challenge 3- March 2019 - Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Andrea Dietrich

September 9, 2019 at 5:36 PM

that light not a good omen! I see this was a winner a while back. Belated Congrats. Good to read you again today.

Eve Roper

March 20, 2019 at 7:00 PM

David, oh my, I hate to hear those words. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France

March 20, 2019 at 4:52 PM

David, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Senryu ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2019 at 2:42 PM

- Congratulations on your great win, David :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

March 19, 2019 at 4:58 PM

your words touched me deeply David as my dad died in hospice and i wrote a poem called the crying candle when he was diagnosed with terminal cancer and i read it at the funeral seevice:-) So lovely to see you back posting:-) hugs jan xx