Senryu Traffic

bent over the wheel
                     the plumber rolls down his window 
                     just a crack
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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Hello Charlie Knowlton, when stuck in traffic it is best to open the window for air. have a nicen day my friend.
Knowlton Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Darlene. Wrote that one at the "crack" of dawn.
Devonshire Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Good one, John! Thanks for the giggle, Carolyn
Knowlton Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 5:59 PM
It`s Charlie, ..but thank you Carolyn for liking and your response.
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 6:49 PM
hahaha.
Knowlton Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 7:28 PM
Sounds like it cracked you up. Thanks for reading and your response.
Beckman  Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:26 PM
I like the humor! Nice poem.
Knowlton Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 4:30 AM
Thank you for reading my poem Nancy, and for your response as well.
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 2:57 PM
LOL - brilliantly worded, Charlie. A FAVE... not that I have a penchant for plumbers' cracks.
Knowlton Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:13 PM
Didn`t know you responded so quickly. I did reword it. Hope it`s for the better. Thank you for reading and liking.
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