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bent over the wheel the plumber rolls down his window just a crack

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Date: 6/8/2019 3:12:00 PM
Hello Charlie Knowlton, when stuck in traffic it is best to open the window for air. have a nicen day my friend.
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 6/8/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Darlene. Wrote that one at the "crack" of dawn.
Date: 6/2/2019 5:56:00 PM
Good one, John! Thanks for the giggle, Carolyn
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 6/2/2019 5:59:00 PM
It`s Charlie, ..but thank you Carolyn for liking and your response.
Date: 5/19/2019 6:49:00 PM
hahaha.
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/19/2019 7:28:00 PM
Sounds like it cracked you up. Thanks for reading and your response.
Date: 5/15/2019 8:26:00 PM
I like the humor! Nice poem.
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 5/16/2019 4:30:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem Nancy, and for your response as well.
Date: 5/8/2019 2:57:00 PM
LOL - brilliantly worded, Charlie. A FAVE... not that I have a penchant for plumbers' cracks.
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Date: 5/8/2019 3:13:00 PM
Didn`t know you responded so quickly. I did reword it. Hope it`s for the better. Thank you for reading and liking.