Senryu - Time and Temperature

Senryu 2/3/2018
Time and Temperature

age tattered elders
worn sweaters sipping tea
a warm comfort

John G. Lawless
©2/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:13 PM
such an interesting image of those elderly people!! The tea is a small enjoyable comfort.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Wonderful, I can see and feel it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:06 AM
I am a tea drinker too and it is such a comfort. I love this John! : )
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