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senryu summer

People narrate themselves differently when they’re happy

Some ideas are
simple, but carry so much 
weight, they’re deceptive.

I knew my problems 
with clinical clarity 
so I ditched them.

We left the city
like it was on fire, there one
minute, gone the next

I couldn’t wait for 
my shoes to hit the ground, I 
mean toes hit the sand.

Summers start out cool
mornings in the 60s, it’s
charmed but not swim hot

Mornings at Héraclée
the air parts jasmine and salt
omelets on the beach.

Watching him stretch, an
appreciative pleasure 
like watching a crush.

deeply romantic
there, I said it, so sue me,
we’re charged particles

Our days are lazy
our nights are crazy, they blurr
together sometimes

We’ve been together 
four years, and we’re still learning
about each other

“Name something that comes 
easily to you.” “Distrust,” 
I answer, smiling.

He squeezes into
my lounge chair, we’re very close up
like two oiled otters

“Do you love me,” he
asked, “Let’s not be carelessly 
broad,” I suggested.

That last was a joke
my answers are typically
insincere satire.

He gets it, gets me.
Why give the man straight answers?
That would be boring.
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Songs for this:
Juice by Lizo [E]
Dance To This (feat. Ariana Grande) by Troye Sivan
Sublime What I Got
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senryus are a form 
of Japanese three line poems
each with 5-7-5 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Fallica Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Wow! A whole narrative. Not like those from HS, when you wondered what LOVE would be like. / <3
Vionet Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 1:05 PM
I’m finding out now, one day at a time =]
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