Eileen Manassian Poet Senryu

Senryu Soliloquy

Must it be spelled out?
Everything in black and white
Where is mystery?

“Spiritual things
Are spiritually discerned”
Carnal? Enigmas….

If you then misjudge
Place the blame without a clue
Golden Rule applies

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal August 20, 2013 at 3:50 PM It's a mystery to me, left me without a clue but I suppose thats the point lol. Take care, Richard

Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 6:43 AM I think I might try this form one day Eileen.Your work demonstrates your depth of talent.Have a great day friend. Eileen Manassian August 19, 2013 at 2:25 PM WOW! This is very sweet coming from you, Mustapha! I thank you! I'm sure you would go great!!! You are so talented...but please stick to romance! You shine in that!

Vicky Tsiluma August 19, 2013 at 2:18 AM Hi Eileen, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the form superbly. It's like you are having a private conversation and we the readers have the pleasure to tune in to it - very nice.I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky. Eileen Manassian August 19, 2013 at 2:26 PM Is it all that? Why thank you, Vicky! I'm glad it reads that way!!! I usually write just what pops into my head. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux August 18, 2013 at 9:44 AM Personally I like a bit of mystery. Eileen Manassian August 18, 2013 at 2:02 PM :) Good to know

Poet Tacito August 18, 2013 at 7:51 AM Many thought provoking lines here. You captured the "soliloquy" essence so very well. Eileen Manassian August 18, 2013 at 2:01 PM :) I'm glad....Wasn't sure what title to use and then that just came up! Glad you felt that the content does live up to the title! Thanks, Drake!