John Lawless Poet Senryu

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the dust of their shoes
             stirring a piqued interest -
			                    ……perusals profit


©10/26/2018


Haiku-Senryu- Writing Challenge October 2018- Poetry Contest

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Constance La France October 30, 2018 at 3:09 PM John, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Charles Messina October 28, 2018 at 9:50 AM Very well done, John Excellent Senryu...Congrats on your win...Best Regards, Charlie

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2018 at 5:41 PM I agree with Paul. This is so creative, and congrats for your win, John

Paul Callus October 27, 2018 at 5:06 PM This is the 2nd time I'm reading and commenting on this creative poem, John, though my first one is nowhere to be seen! Congratulations on your podium finish. // paul Tom Cunningham October 28, 2018 at 4:59 AM Paul, You may have been a victim of black Sunday last week when poems, comments and soupmails vanished into cyber space.

Tom Cunningham October 27, 2018 at 3:25 PM Nice one John, congrats. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2018 at 3:15 PM - Congratulations on your great Senryu win, John :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 26, 2018 at 9:13 AM Ooh suave poem. Fabulous. Good luck in the contest :) xomo