Constance La France Poet Senryu

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Senryu- In My Red Dream

a red butterfly
stirred me from my crimson sheets-
                           kissed my scarlet lips


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March 2, 2016


Poetry/Senryu/in my red dream
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All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, United Colours: Red
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2016 at 11:09 PM Broken, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~ Constance La France March 15, 2016 at 8:59 AM Linda, thanks for the congrats and the luv ~

James Inman March 9, 2016 at 8:52 AM I adore this. A sweet write that you have used red references turn in to a passionate poem. Love the duality. Amazing how so few words can stir ones emotions. Constance La France March 9, 2016 at 9:38 PM James, so happy you like my red poem, it did turn out kinda sultry, thanks for the amazing !

Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 8:02 AM You are one and the only one...so unique..!!!! Amazing senryu ! Constance La France March 9, 2016 at 9:52 PM Red, thanks for visiting with the unique and amazing, two words I love ~

Funom Makama March 5, 2016 at 11:18 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful.... Constance La France March 5, 2016 at 3:52 PM Funom, thanks so much for visiting with the wonderfuls !!!

Vladislav Raven March 4, 2016 at 2:00 PM Hi Broken, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful Senryu, of peace and serenity. A dream within a dream. A seven and winging its butterfly wings into my faves....Vlad. Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 2:06 PM Vlad, thanks so much for the lovely comment, the seven and the fav ~

Laura Leiser March 3, 2016 at 10:51 PM Loved the romantic imagery in this great haiku, BW! Congrats on your win :) Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 12:47 AM Laura, thank you for the great comment and the congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2016 at 8:18 PM oooh la la. One of the very best I have seen yet on the list. Congrats, Constance. Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:00 AM Andrea, thanks for that great compliment and the congrats !!

Eve Roper March 3, 2016 at 7:27 PM Love this poem, congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Constance. Hugs dear friend Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:02 AM Eve, thanks for the love, the congratulations and the hugs !!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 3, 2016 at 7:04 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:21 AM Nayda, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !

Stephen Pennell March 3, 2016 at 6:05 PM congrats broken wings on your win Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:25 AM Stephen thanks for the congrats !

Beautiful Scars March 3, 2016 at 5:09 PM BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Constance La France March 4, 2016 at 1:40 AM Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and smiles !!

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2016 at 12:50 PM Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Constance La France March 3, 2016 at 4:57 PM Sara, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~

Jill Spagnola March 3, 2016 at 5:45 AM What a lovely dream, I love the visuals you choose for your work. They always add zest to your poetry,,:), jill Constance La France March 3, 2016 at 11:05 AM Jill, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the compliment !!

Robert Heemstra March 2, 2016 at 8:18 PM Beautiful! Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 8:39 PM Robert, thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful !

Lewis Raynes March 2, 2016 at 6:57 PM love this simple yet engaging and beautiful write Broken Wings. Thanks Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 7:38 PM Lewis, thanks for visiting my red poem with beautiful !

Walter T. Ashe March 2, 2016 at 6:34 PM Absolutely....visually and expressively surreal! This captures my artistic senses! Nice...Broken Wing! Write On! Constance La France March 2, 2016 at 7:46 PM Walter, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment !