Constance La France Poet Senryu

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Senryu - I Went To Visit

an old lady sweet
with much clutter of antiques -
the cookie is burnt

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March 17, 2019


Poetry/Senryu/I went to visit
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Eve Roper March 18, 2019 at 12:26 AM I like your poem, sometimes the burnt ones are the best :)

Anisha Dutta March 17, 2019 at 10:50 PM Inspired by your example. 'll try.

Caren Krutsinger March 17, 2019 at 8:16 PM Whoa; are you reading my mind? My omelet was burned this morning. Nice one.

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2019 at 6:00 PM Like jan, I sure enjoyed your twist on this!! Thanks for this latest contest.

Jan Allison March 17, 2019 at 3:33 PM love the twist in the poem Constance, a great contest example:-) hugs jan xx Constance La France March 17, 2019 at 3:37 PM Thanks Jan.. looking forward to your entry !