Eve Roper Poet Senryu

Senryu - Courage To Live

continued unrest
face masked in a wet pillow-
sounds of coughing pain

10/25/2018


Poetry Contest: Haiku-Senryu- Writing Challenge October 2018- 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Sara Kendrick November 9, 2018 at 12:12 PM Congrats on your win. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France October 30, 2018 at 1:32 PM Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2018 at 4:24 PM Congratulations on your emotional write!

Charles Messina October 28, 2018 at 9:34 AM Great Senryu, Eve...Congrats on your 1st place win...hugs // Charlie

Tom Cunningham October 28, 2018 at 4:55 AM Congratulations Eve. Tom

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2018 at 5:32 PM Congrats for your win. It's a tragic story told in those few lines.

Lycia Harding October 27, 2018 at 5:10 PM Congratulations, Eve! I love this tragic Senryu. xoxo

Paul Callus October 27, 2018 at 4:37 PM Back with congratulations, Eve. This emotional poem is a worthy top winner...hugs // paul

P.S. Awtry October 27, 2018 at 3:51 PM Congratulations :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2018 at 3:19 PM - Congratulations on your great Senryu win, Eve :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Watson October 27, 2018 at 2:53 PM A senryu treats human nature and you have expressed deep sadness and loss which so many, like you yourself have suffered with a frankness which is very moving, Eve.

Paul Callus October 27, 2018 at 8:33 AM Despite everything, one keeps finding the strength to go on; faith and love are usually the main factors. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2018 at 1:31 PM - Sensitive and beautiful, Eve - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2018 at 2:18 AM A sad emotional senryu Eve . Well written. Tom

Beata Agustin October 26, 2018 at 1:53 AM ...yet with trust in God Who heals, we can have bliss-filled peace... and yes, the courage to live on - by His grace. God bless you.

Jan Allison October 26, 2018 at 12:51 AM aww so sad Eve:-( hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger October 25, 2018 at 11:43 PM This sounds painful. Good luck in the contest my friend.