John Lawless Poet Senryu

Senryu 7-9-2016

Senryu 7-9-2016


take one

Winds merry-go-round
chasing the dreams of clouds
stirring the pot

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take two

Winds merry-go-round
chasing the dreams of clouds
stirring the poet


John G. Lawless
7/9/2016

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CayCay Godwin July 10, 2016 at 12:30 PM I like! CayCay John Lawless July 10, 2016 at 8:37 PM Thanks CayCay, the haiku/senryu wet paint sign keeps tempting me to test it one more time.

Tim Smith July 10, 2016 at 7:41 AM Excellent John. I really love the second...it has multiple layers. One of the first true Senyru I have seen. John Lawless July 10, 2016 at 8:10 AM Tim, it was a true Senryu when written as the word poet was an inadvertent typo or a muse induced correction. Thanks for stopping by.