Senryu 3

scent of a candle 
     labeled “island moonlight” ~ 
             somehow...it is

              03 Feb 2022
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February 22, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Truth can be a surprise, even in a Senryu. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, David. I'm new but will be following your poetry. Bill
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February 22, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Sounds like an sensory perception that brings back a beautiful memory, nicely done.
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February 3, 2022 at 10:05 PM
Love the attitude in this one, David. Can hear your voice in the words. Not easy to achieve in a senryu, but you've shown us the way. Kudos, Gershon
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