Senryu 023

just a piece of you needed to fend off the blues... lonely river flows. © Harry j Horsman 2013

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/28/2013 5:07:00 AM

A very romantic moving piece Harry. I enjoyed it greatly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2013 5:21:00 PM

wow!!! (glad I decided to click on your name when I saw it under someone's poem just now) i am going off for the night soon.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2013 3:15:00 PM

lovely senryu Harry no need for the ... in this form only in haiku and no need for the period..one dreamy write! Light & Love

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/27/2013 1:41:00 PM

Nice Senryu, Harry. Raw one! Love ya, Toquyen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/27/2013 9:46:00 AM

Hi just love this you do these so well . now dam that river xx

Len Gasun

Date: 1/27/2013 1:57:00 AM

A very lovely and touching piece! A great write indeed! thank you so much my dear friend Harry for sharing and your precious time stopping by to visit some of my latest poems. love/hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2013 9:40:00 PM

so intensely lovely this Senryu Harry luv and sweet friend .. so good to read u again ..thankxx for prayers and concern during my health crisis ..on slow mend but try to be on more as health allows luv .. your comments so inspire me to press on with my poetry .. blessings to u and Elaine ..

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/26/2013 8:04:00 PM

So little that speaks volumes. Loved it. Thank you for the kind comment on Altar of Stone. Work and family matters has consumed my free time. Writing has been on the back burner to long and I hope to be able to sharpen my pencil soon.