Senryu 017

you are my temple a heavenly experience... again i enter. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/7/2013 3:03:00 AM

nice one ,,, Happy New Year Harry ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 8:48:00 AM

soupmail for ya

Kerry Singleton

Date: 1/4/2013 5:38:00 PM

Love it, :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/31/2012 8:57:00 AM

Beautiful tribute, Harry...jimbo

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/31/2012 2:54:00 AM

A classical rhythm with modern pain, worded philosophically where vision demands really. Thanks for all the comments of the past and wish you Happy Christmas and happy New year 2013. Loved always, my sweet friend. Am busy, sorry for late. Always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/29/2012 11:49:00 AM

wow some interpretations can be made here harry. lucky whoever on the receiving end ... xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2012 11:32:00 AM

wow!!!! "nuff said!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/29/2012 9:22:00 AM

enjoyed and loved ~~~ very nice written..:) SK

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/29/2012 9:00:00 AM

interesting last word with several possible interpretations - very cleverly done!