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Senryu-Loss

Flowing life force stay give me another happy.... Taps plays soulfully For contest sponsored by Black Eyed Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/24/2012 8:31:00 PM
Doris, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 10/26/2012 12:38:00 PM
Well thanks for this one Doris..) really smooth and alive write.."
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:49:00 AM
I can hear it :)
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Date: 9/28/2012 2:12:00 PM
So sad when there is loss. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
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Date: 9/26/2012 1:49:00 PM
enjoyed this clever, but sad senryu, my friend
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Date: 9/26/2012 6:43:00 AM
Oh i like this, the imagery awesome...
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Date: 9/25/2012 4:14:00 PM
very nice senryu Doris .....thanks for your comments
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Date: 9/25/2012 1:46:00 PM
That's the long and short of it, eh? Black Eyed Susan should like this one. Love, daver
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:08:00 AM
It is going to be okay..Enjoyed reading..Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner..Mom
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:06:00 AM
A VIVID PICTURE DORIS BRINGING SAD EMOTION AT LOSS OF LOVED ONES .. WINNING WISHES LUV .. SO GLAD U R BACK ..
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