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Senisble Shoes

She always wore sensible shoes A working woman, self reliant No need for expensive heels In fact, her shoes told her entire story She was sensible in every way Do the shoes make the woman or vice versa? She always wanted to splurge on en expensive pair Never could bring herself to do it Dam, those sensible shoes!

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Date: 6/18/2017 3:27:00 PM
Personally, I always dress for comfort. Clothes and shoes do not make the person. Fun read and smart lady, Mike:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/4/2024 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Daniel!
Date: 6/18/2017 10:46:00 AM
Waiting in NYC in my improperly parked car, while a family member was treated with radiation therapy, I watched the fashion show. I have observed that the women in comfortable shoes look better in the face, probably because they're not in pain.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2017 12:37:00 PM
That totally makes sense!
Date: 6/18/2017 10:35:00 AM
LOL I like this fun one. I can identify with it :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2017 12:38:00 PM
I used to love to wear very high platform heeled shoes in the '70's

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