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Senior Year

It began on a high note Dreams of a New Frontier Those dreams were shattered in Texas In the Fall of the same year Christmas time was solemn Before the storm there was the calm We saw them escalate a war Sending our young to Vietnam It was a vibrant time to be alive A good invasion hit our shore The British sent their music Our lives would be changed forever more The times they were “a changing” Was it better, was it worse There was no time for apathy Was it a blessing or a curse In June came graduation The fulfillment of our dreams The Four Seasons sang about a Rag Doll We were introduced to the Supremes Now that our senior year was over And we would go our separate ways There remained a bond to hold us Until our dying days Some went off to college Not knowing what’s in store Almost all would serve their country Some went off to war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 11:26:00 AM
After David and Ruben ... I can only say thanks for such a nostalgic powerhouse of a write.
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:59:00 AM
The last line is stark reality imposed on a rose of memory. Vince, God bless you and others for service to a great country. The freedom of the world owes a great debt to you and all others. Vietnam like 9/11 is a pivotal moment of change and you captured it awesomely ... you made me suddenly miss everything that was the past. Great poem, my brother.
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Date: 6/1/2009 8:16:00 PM
This is an excellent piece about memories of friends and youth. But, also sad because when graduation ended some had to go fight for the country and didn't know what their future held. but, they did the country proud!
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Date: 6/1/2009 2:16:00 PM
Awesome nostalgic write. Just reading a book about the 60's. Feel like this should be in it. A serious tone to this, and you are right, it is a time and a bond never forgotten. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/1/2009 11:51:00 AM
poetic, heartfelt, humanizing and right-on! thanks for feedback Vince, I'm a little late gettin' back, I've been off the electronic grid in northern Minnesota for a week, cool poem of my era, my 3-yrs. older brother missed bein' sent to 'Nam by 5-numbers...some of his friends came home in a box or insane.....Jim
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Date: 6/1/2009 11:24:00 AM
Vince I think those were the turning points in this countrys values. The war divided us as a nation and it has not fully recovered. Vince you are a very wise person and your words speak that of a man of honor. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 6/1/2009 8:24:00 AM
What a fantastic write Vince - excellent rhyme and flow with a message all can relate to - This is without a doubt one of my favorites and one of the favorites of my favorites - Splendid writing - Made me think of my son who came home from Iraq and is now stationed in New York waiting to go to Afghanistan - I personally think we should empty the prisons, gear them up and drop them on their as_ - Fire with fire I believe is the term - God Bless you my friend, MJ
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:51:00 AM
You stirred up my own memories,...those were such uncertain times, and one never knew what would happen next. Being so young, and new to the grown-up world, who knew how this new history would change the world...our world? This makes me relive a piece of my own discovery. ~ Carrie
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