Drjim Martin Poet Rhyme

Senior Moment

I’m sorry to have troubled you
So early in the day.
I meant you no harm
Just had something to say.

I surely should have known
You’d still have closed eyes.
How was I to know
That not all are early to rise?

Now that you’re awake,
Half way through the day,
I sadly can’t remember 
What I had to say.

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Robin Davis September 30, 2013 at 5:34 PM cute and silly. A fun read especially for those that can relate to this. nice job Drjim Martin September 30, 2013 at 5:45 PM Glad you liked it!! Thanks....Jim

Jack Ellison October 14, 2012 at 8:44 PM I chuckled at this one my friend! I can certainly identify with it... cheers, Jack

Vicky Tsiluma October 11, 2012 at 2:31 PM Poignant write this! It makes one reflect on the challenges that comes with age. Nicely done!