Senescence

I'm a gnarly pine tree. Twisted! Stunted!
A melody-filled flute once, I'm mute now!
With nightmares of winter, I am haunted.
Twigs with dry leaves I see in every bough.

My floral gardens are grazed by cattle.
Cobras crawl into my wrecked house debris.
Why do I seem to lose my inner battle?
Why, often, from myself do I try to flee?

I still see tall mountains in the distance.
The Milky Way shines in all its brightness.
Souls undergo a renewed existence.
Nature seems to tend toward boundlessness.

My movements are moments of reflection
As my pilgrimage is towards perfection...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Theraven Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 5:57 PM
Hello Christuraj, The boughs may've seen many a winter, but this poem's binding message is ageless in the telling. -Richard
Alex Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 4:06 AM
Thank you. May God Bless You!
Sidwell Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 3:03 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderfully written and insightful poem!
Gentile Avatar
February 2, 2026 at 8:40 AM
I am wondering the concept of perfection you may be seeking Christuraj! The afterlife, it seems ! So powerfully written, conveying your feelings with such imagery! So well done! Happy Monday !!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 1:58 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Senescence" write. What a great last line. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thought provoking poetry, Christuraj:)
Alex Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 5:16 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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