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Self-Portrait... - Tanka

light won't reach my eyes...
for where my eyes carry me
light isn't born yet...
i'm only a wanderer
among dry unspoken words...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 11, 2010 at 11:38 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Liliana. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

September 2, 2010 at 5:10 PM

congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Jayne Eggins

August 30, 2010 at 7:29 AM

among dry unspoken words ... brilliant end line ... congratulations on being featured this week love Jayne

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2010 at 6:09 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Liliana. Love, Carol

Joe Fisher

June 26, 2010 at 2:10 AM

love this. " dry unspoken words", im totally there with you. in this bankrupt world the only true currency is to be able to relate. i relate with you here. thanks.-Fish.

Daver Austin

June 25, 2010 at 8:12 AM

Oh, those dark, dry places. Congrats on the selection. daver

Adeleke Adeite

June 23, 2010 at 10:18 AM

This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~